Feedback for practical.

In this lesson the whole class, showcased what they had so far. The feedback from the class as well as our teacher was...

Criticism 

• Unfinished as we needed to add two more titles
• Also the sound needed to be "more crisp"
• Too short! only 50 seconds long

Positive

• "Short but sweet"- The class enjoyed what we had so far despite it being short
• The extremely quick sharp edit of the close up of the mask (along with the reinforcing high pitch noise) was "jumpy" and "exciting"
• The hazy flashback scenes with the shadows was a "convincing reinforcement of what the story was portraying"